Impulse

this is one of my favourite ones

immerse immutable
romeo in rainbows
rainbows, rainbows
colour brightly
immaculate imprint
a touch of a kiss
flying tenderly through the air
looking for
something
someone
you.

impassioned impact
words follow
trust, hope, care
immovable impression
la la la love song
sings softly
butterfly flutters
around buttercups
in green grass.

sun shines
desire
immaculate impulse
a hug
wrapping bodies in warmth
forever.

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

This had a wonderful visual quality and flowed so perfectly. I liked the way this made me feel and see something like a star burst with incredible colors and shapes being given birth right in front of me. You words are always such a pleasure to read and this is for sure a great way to start my morning off with.


Well Done!!!!!!

I love the visions I get from this poem, and the words are so sweet and tender and it's all very intimate and pleasured, well done on this- keep it up! :) xx

[Dead Angel]

well you do have a way with words in this poem Gary. very vivid detail and its so intense, i absolutely love the picture as well. you paint such a lovely image with your words. :)

[Fantasyfairy]

A beautiful poem. The imagery you create is a lovely one, and added by the picture. A lovely flow, and nicely written, well done. XX

[TL Boehm]

beautiful gentle writing with an ethereal quality - the alliteration was delightful and the theme - BLISS. Well done. Its been so chaotic - its nice to read something like this for a change.

[Celtic Cat]

I can see why this is one of your favorites. A lovely play on words, you can feel the give and take in this, and the image is a nice reflection of the piece. Excellent job on this one. Beautiful.

[Oz]

The imagery here is stunning and really held me in a tight grip until I finished it. This poem radiates a kind of warmth that isn't easily achieved with mere words. I think you've succesfully captured the deep emotion this poem set out to portray.

Great job!

-Oz

[Nick Erickson]

The imagery in this jumped out - giving me the same feeling as though I had given into an impulse - desire.
The picture at the beginning was a great intro to the written visual of the poem, but the flow and your words are what give this piece it's imagery.
Very vivid and exciting.
Well done!

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

wow... the entire piece is just fantastic... love the picture you used for this... the bright vibrant colors in the art work flows right down into your words... fantastic Gary!

[George Love]

Very light feel to this, but some wonderful thoughts. A nice work to read as I close out my day!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Enraptured is the word I think most describes this work. Beautifull penned. Thanks for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha