Impulse

this is one of my favourite ones

immerse immutable
romeo in rainbows
rainbows, rainbows
colour brightly
immaculate imprint
a touch of a kiss
flying tenderly through the air
looking for
something
someone
you.

impassioned impact
words follow
trust, hope, care
immovable impression
la la la love song
sings softly
butterfly flutters
around buttercups
in green grass.

sun shines
desire
immaculate impulse
a hug
wrapping bodies in warmth
forever.

Reviews

[Robert Luna]

This had a wonderful visual quality and flowed so perfectly. I liked the way this made me feel and see something like a star burst with incredible colors and shapes being given birth right in front of me. You words are always such a pleasure to read and this is for sure a great way to start my morning off with.


Well Done!!!!!!

[Alistair Canlin]

A clever flow to this, made it incredibly easy to read and to create the images in your head.
A smart love poem that manage to stay clear of being sickly and schmaltzy

[Steve Thompson]

Love the way your words worked in this piece, very very interesting, is that your art? I love that pic, its really nice.

[Joseph - Michael]

This is quite a visionary writing you got there. I really almost could related all the way when I was in the need for a simple hug.

Anyway, this is a really great imagination on the need for the passion. Not to forget the picture, it matched the writing so well...

[OrAnGe SmArTiEs]

This is very good, it flows very well, it made think and feeel a rush of emotions.

Good Job!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

This is beautiful.. la la la la love song.. love that line ..it does have great visuals and such a softly romantic subtle sensual feel ..

Chloe
xoxo

[Floating on the feather..]

Gentle words that caress you softly.
A beautifully penned poem.

Shinjini

[O!]

this is quite unlike you. I did giggle a bit coz you were able to say so much in such few words... hahahaha...
The picture compliments the poem and the poem does the picture justice...i can imagine why this is ur favourite..i like the 'immovable impression'

x,
O!

[The Ponderings of Bella]

In the everyday world color is color ..... nothing more than something you wear and see... it is almost always diregarded for its true splendor ... what a dour world we would live in without color ... you have captured into this poem the true power of what color is..... simply captivating!! Beautiful poem, well done :)

I love the visions I get from this poem, and the words are so sweet and tender and it's all very intimate and pleasured, well done on this- keep it up! :) xx

I love the visions I get from this poem, and the words are so sweet and tender and it's all very intimate and pleasured, well done on this- keep it up! :) xx