4.28

Some days you jst write what's going through your mind

4.28

An average girl from a distance

Sophisticated lady from close

With every word I got lost in her world

If the first cut is usually deep

This should be the grand canyon

With a world full of shallow personality

I left a part of me with her

As I saw tears in her eyes

Never had tears looked so beautiful

When I thought about finding the one 

I always thought she'd be smiling at nature

The one thing I love more than dance

Never thought she'd be in a club

But I saw a connection in her tears 

And everything she did after that was perfect

Because I saw love in her imperfections

Nothing like a person who can cry in a crowd

Over the smallest thing

Its a show of courage to feel

Confidence to show emotion

Ability to oppose the common notion

She's one you handle with caution

The last thing you want is to hurt her emotions.

Author's Note

Hones comments, criticisms all welcome.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem a lot. You described the woman with care and concern. You create a vision of true beauty with your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Gazza]

Thank you very much, I really appreciate your time reading my writing.

[Tina Louise UK]

This felt very heartfelt and honest..a beautiful tender piece :) x

[Gazza]

Thanks Tia, always nice to get some encouragement.