That Night...

The night I met a lady that changed my life, well for a while!

That Night….

 

That’s the night I walked out of the darkness into the light,

I never knew all I had to do was look across the road.

Thought I chased pavements, till I realised I was in flight,

That winter night I felt like all I ever missed was bestowed.

 

I always heard she had a pretty face and curves,

I could not agree more as it’s the first of her I saw.

Her beauty lay in the eyes, could stare at them till fall,

They are the path to love, the meal her heart serves.

 

This meeting brought such a glow to my heart,

The glow a few will see, and only she will know.

A glow so bright, it hasn’t dimmed from the start,

Proof that even time can’t stop the flow.

 

This love brings me sweet pain, but I want more,

Driven by a dream I can't control.

I want the truth of her, untamed and whole,

In frantic hope I haunt her closed door.

 

I wish I knew her thoughts and shared her sorrows,

I wish she came to me when the sun didn’t shine and the sky was dark.

So I can remind her that she is like no one else in the universe,

And stand by her even if she didn’t love me back.

 

 

For it’s to my heart and not my ears she whispered.

Gazza™

Reviews

[Talks To Trees]

Gives one a reson to believe. lovely

[Gazza]

Great that it communicates that to you, thats my favorite word by the way

[vadess40]

Beautiful piece! It flows nicely, and communicates so much. Well done!

[Gazza]

Thank you.

[Tai Ryens]

Motivation to do any and every thing for another, but she will not do the same back. The absolute worst kind of pain. I like your ending.

[Gazza]

It is painful, thanks mate.

[deepblue04]

I like the flow, and good job! This is very well written in my opinion

[Gazza]

thank you

[Falling Leaf.]

A lovely piece. I quite enjoyed. Well done..

[Gazza]

thank you

[Dark Tower]

Nice flow, and the imagery is quite moving, especially the second stanza.