Lady of my Dreams

The words of a young man that thinks he is the perfect man for his idea of a perfect woman

When i wake up every morning i think of you

But sometimes I wish I didnt and I cant help it

The thought of your smile and voice bring me joy

A warmth that is welcome to start my day

 

I can feel myself give up on stopping my thoughts

But i'm not sure anymore whether i should

So many battles with emotions I've fought

This time i will let nature dictate the mood

 

Certainly feels like a lost cause at times

But your nature gives me a glimmer of hope

I realise that the timing might be my crime

And I believe if you cant then maybe we,can cope

 

I really never thought this would happen

But now that it has I wont ask too much

Just a little care and ear when feelings dampen

And I too will be there to push when you slouch

 

I want to be there for the smiles and delights

For it is they that make life worthwhile

Its no fluke that you ended up in my sight

I've admired u as an inspiration for a  while

 

I know i'm more sensitive than u may know

But I ask to be guided when it gets stupid

While allowing the bump in my chest to glow

My world was quiet and dying and now u shook it

 

First it was your spirit then it was your smile

Then it was your beauty and now your story

If every girl was a step you would be a mile

Your guile and simplicity covers your name in glory

 

Its hard not to admire how you stay so real

When surrounded by sugar coated aloe

Finding a person like that is almost unreal

Knowing you must be as beautiful as a carol

 

I wish I would know you the way I want to

But like tape u cant see the inner side of the reel

I know I may not be the best or nearly as cool

But I wish I was as invisible as you make me feel

 

 

Gazza

Reviews

[Blue Ivory]

I can relate to this actually. I happen to have a guy of my dreams and even though he doesn't have a name or much of a face, my mental image of him is still very vivid-if that's even possible...I can feel his beauty, I can sense it. What you've created here is beautiful! Nice work :D

[Pencrafter]

An interesting list of attributes. The last time I focused so much on a charming woman I married her. Nice poem, although I would just write 'you' instead of 'u'. Texting is destroying our language.

[Gazza]

I'm happy for you and would be very glad to see the same. I'm trying to get out of the habit, it really gets into your system but don't worry, i'm working on that.

[Texas Greg]

Aye! The yearn...Have one called "Dream Girl" that I may post. Jury is still out on site format.
Well done!

[Gazza]

Thanks, go for it and post.

[Enid Blake]

We love to love.
Love this!

[Gazza]

Thanks, love makes the world go round :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem of romance. Good to hold on to love as the great journey to joy and happiness. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Gazza]

thank you...key words there, hold on.

[Androglossia]

The hopeless romantic:)

Your poem speaks of someone very important in your life and how the power of holding that someone can be so important. And indeed, if we are in love with someone, if we are with them, holding can be more powerful than any sex can ever be… to be alive. But it could also be frustrating when we can't be with that love, when feeling their heartbeat is impossible when it could possibly be the most powerful thing anyone will ever feel.

Emotionally driven and a great piece!

[Gazza]

yeah she is very important, thanks for your review and i'm glad you could see into the heart that came from

[Harley (arbiter)]

Amazing!! Great job! Only error (and it could be on purpose so if it is sorry) is in the last line of the 3rd stanza theirs a comma instead of a space. But anyway great job!

[Gazza]

Thanks mate, good eye, its not a mistake, its the easiest way I could find to get a reader to slow down or even stop at we.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Aaaah clever I thought it could be meant but wasn't for sure

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Wow, this poem is so amazing!
100/100

[Gazza]

Thank you, glad you found it so.

[Tai Ryens]

Not too much a fan of this genre, but it was okay, regarding concept and phrasing. I do feel you dragged it on too long though, you lost intensity as stanzas passed.

[Gazza]

Thanks you for the opinion, will have a good look

[xxxrawr_friendxxx]

This poem= Love. Me= Speechless. You= Should be published. Like, now. XDD

[Gazza]

Lol thank you thank you, glad you liked it, will work hard to see poetry touch people and even harder to be published one day :)