Love Poem

You are the mirror of my mind
The rib from me He's taken
The call from Heaven screaming
You are a love story

And when the ground below is cracking
That path we've walked in faith

And when the darkened castles come
Claiming the mud and clay deformed

And when hearts are filled with violence
and fear does not reside

And when the proud seas declare war
on us. Men, the race of God

And when the mighty mountains fail
The Heaven's floor does rise

We'll hold on to each other
in spite of what they say

We'll walk whats left of Yahweh's path
We'll take it day by day

Author's Note

I wrote this while listening to "Just the Two of Us" (LOL!)

For a friend

Reviews

[Dev]

This is a really well written piece. It has deep meaning and great imagery to it. I actually get what you're saying really well

My fav part was the last 2 ending lines

"We'll walk whats left of Yahweh's path
We'll take it day by day"

a great way of ending the note in hope.

[Stacey Watts]

This is a very beautiful piece. Nicely expressed. It is very inspiring.

[Lydia]

This is really quite powerful. Leaves the reader with hope, yet also hopelessness. I like that a lot. If this was real life (who knows, maybe it is), it would be one of those tragic stories where someone comes back from the dead just to love their lover one more day. Like that Nicolas Cage movie, just not as dumb. More powerful than that. With more hope, and more hopelessness. I'm rambling, but I like this quite a bit.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Many powerful lines in the poem. I had to read the poem a few times. It was so good. Ending was perfect. Good advice for most life.
Coyote

[heido]

"You are the mirror of my mind
The rib from me He's taken
The call from Heaven screaming
You are a love story"

I got butterflies..