Love Poem

You are the mirror of my mind
The rib from me He's taken
The call from Heaven screaming
You are a love story

And when the ground below is cracking
That path we've walked in faith

And when the darkened castles come
Claiming the mud and clay deformed

And when hearts are filled with violence
and fear does not reside

And when the proud seas declare war
on us. Men, the race of God

And when the mighty mountains fail
The Heaven's floor does rise

We'll hold on to each other
in spite of what they say

We'll walk whats left of Yahweh's path
We'll take it day by day

Author's Note

I wrote this while listening to "Just the Two of Us" (LOL!)

For a friend

Reviews

[Dev]

This is a really well written piece. It has deep meaning and great imagery to it. I actually get what you're saying really well

My fav part was the last 2 ending lines

"We'll walk whats left of Yahweh's path
We'll take it day by day"

a great way of ending the note in hope.

[Tony]

This writer is unique.
How rare!

Day by day is the way. Why push it?

[ChristianM]

Not bad.
Very powerful and at the same time emotional.
The build up to the end was nicely done.

[there is no more from m..]

wow amazing

[Phibby Venable]

like a beautiful love song of faith and love continued..very fine.

[Jasmarine]

This is well written and creates the image of a couple staying with one another, even though life's hardships test their relationship's strength to the limit.

I really liked
"We'll hold on to each other
in spite of what they say"

It's the trust in another human being that we want and expect to have but doesn't always exist when we want it too.

[Kimmi]

What a wonderful poem.
I love this one simple line "You are a love story" it just struck a chord.
It followed really nicely all the way through :) And the ending lines were perfect.

[The Tea Party Mouse.]

Taking a "leap of faith" is easier with a friend or lover. This is an uplifting piece.

[Sasha]

Great Poem! just the two of us by eminem??

[Jane Doe]

awwwwww

[little lily Bride of Ch..]

Very Powerful Ouit beautiful and very imagery
My fav part was the last 2 ending lines

"We'll walk whats left of Yahweh's path
We'll take it day by day"