Eyes that wonder

Eyes that wonder at the realm of universe

are souls who wander to reach the goals

No matter, my vicinity to consistent fall

i'll cease to die since the beginning of life

mountains for those height is a concept

and not an arrogance or glory

i'll be a man who crave for greatness

yet learn to live poor..

In this life and lives before my first birth

something had fallen to rise abound

I am going to know 'it', yes

yet i know 'it' has to make itself evident

the wall of fame or love or life

nothing is as permanent as truth

i am going to know 'it', yes

yet i know

i've to die infinite times to kill infinite lies first..

Reviews

[Lacey Sue]

I mean I'm accomplishing my goal and finally started to study for my permit and am answering 40 ?s, but really good poem

[Gaurav]

that is awesome...keep it up

[Anuja Sharma]

Indeed a nice read!!
Keep up.

[Gaurav]

Thank you Anuja :)

[A.G.]

Lovely poem you got here 😊-
Deep and comforting. Endless.
I love it. Thank you for sharing. Can't wait to read more of your poetry!
-Angelina 🖤

[Gaurav]

Thank you Angeline for your beautiful feedback. Hugs

[A.G.]

😊 your welcome

[Najam Us Saher]

Great poem about the central theme of self-confidence and believing in your abilities.

[Gaurav]

Thank you Najam. Hope you are doing great :)

[Najam Us Saher]

Yeah! Hope the same. You are welcome.

[Arshia]

Deeply philosophical and motivational, this poem gives a unique sense of comfort to the reader. I liked it! Good work :)

[Gaurav]

thank you Arshia

[Priyanshi]

i've to die infinite times to kill infinite lies first..
loved this line the most...and the poetry as a whole too.

[Gaurav]

Thank you Priyanshi.

[Priyanshi]

you're welcome

[Avia]

This is one of those pieces that just makes me think. I like this :)

[Gaurav]

Thank you for your feedback :)

[3X3MPLER]

its deep and poetic. you have an interesting point of view

[Gaurav]

thank you. appreciate it

[Ruth]

Epic...the finding of self through truth and justice of internal wanderings. Sometimes to live we must defy life, as I say. If that makes sense :)

[Gaurav]

Thank you for your review