Waiting for Me

I long to meet you to find me

I'll wait till tomorrow

to meet my today,

tired but supreme happiness

will fall on my barren smile...

Your kiss on my lips

when God will feel

a true love you'll say

without uttering a word...

Lips on lips or lips on eyes

or surreal beauty of your breasts

shall kill ugly dimension

of one axis in my brain..

Ecstasy will cover my lower instincts

allowing my heart to follow 

the path to mid of eyebrows,

i will rise in your love

when i will fall before you...

Nothing will change 'cause

everything remains the same,

as i will see the truth

of me in you and,

truth it is that

i will find me in you,

will pray that you find you in me...

Reviews

[zunie frost]

Nothing will change 'cause
everything remains the same,
as i will see the truth
of me in you and,
truth it is that
i will find me in you,
will pray that you find you in me...
These line you wrote are really powerful ........ great theme of poem and awesome thought are pit into it

[Gaurav]

Thank you for the review :)

[zunie frost]

Welcome my friend

[Nicole Schuster]

I love this. The idea that someone can help you find yourself, and the hope that you can be the one to introduce someone to themselves. So powerful and amazing. Well done :)

[Gaurav]

Thank you for the review..

[zaisham9393]

Loved this poem. Awesome work:)!

[Gaurav]

Thank you Zaisha.

[Emily]

Lovely wording!
Keep it up!!

[Gaurav]

Thank you Emily

[Joshua McNay]

Wow Gauruv! This was a splendid piece. You can really feel the emotion in it. I will find me in you, a great line and a wonderful sentiment.

[Gaurav]

Thank you Joshua.

[Joshua McNay]

Of course.

[Lydia Shutter]

When you can see yourself in another, it is true love. Your words are elegantly sensual, beautifully erotic. Filled with deep longing. A powerful love poem. Lydi**

[Gaurav]

Thank you Lydia. Appreciate it.

[BL]

There are some great lines and poerful meanings in this poem. The people we chose to be with may be reflections of ourselves and the you in me line really says that loudly. Good write, enjoyed it greatly.

[Gaurav]

Thanks for your kind comments.

[Ruth]

Beautiful...the hope and conviction here are palpable...

[Gaurav]

Thank you for the review.

[andrew mitchell]

Its funny when you do meet your soulmate. you do see a lot of similarities in each other hence I will find me in you is a great line. Nice work!

[Gaurav]

Thank you Andrew.

[wordman]

i will find me in you ! a great line,enjoyed

[Gaurav]

Thank you for the review