Vulnerable

to be human is to be in vulnerability - Brene Brown

When faced with obstacles

Will to live were lost

I had to shout ‘em,

Remove their existence

In proximity to vulnerability though

I couldn’t utter a word

 

When faced with love

I dreamt to lose you

Doubted your intentions

‘cause I never was used to be hugged

So  vulnerable and insecure

Were my soul

I erased your face from my painting

Reviews

[zaisham9393]

Beautifully written.Thank You so much for sharing :))!

[Gaurav]

Thank you Zaisha.

[Emily]

Lovely wording!
Keep it up!!

[Gaurav]

Thank you Emily.

[iamshadowine]

i really like this poem! keep writing! :D

[Gaurav]

Thank you :)

[Dayran]

It points to a need to undertake our self management with some subtle gentleness. You can't shout it down. By raising ourselves to its greater concerns we make ourselves and our will ... more compliant with our common needs.

[Gaurav]

Point noted. Thank you for the review Dayran.

[Anna]

There are a few grammatical errors, but all together it was good. I enjoyed a sense of melancholy that I felt came from this write.

[Gaurav]

Thank you Anna.

[wordman]

such a sad place to be,self doubt and not trusting ! ,great write

[Gaurav]

I know. Trying to fight with demons. Thanks.

[Philip Muls]

Openture instead of closure. That is the difficulty of exposing ourselfs to be vulnerable. Not to seek safety but just let life be, wild and irrevocable.

Well done. Could you review my story A Thousand Weddings which is set in India. Much obliged.

[Gaurav]

Thank you. It will be my pleasure to read.