Beautiful Now

Live in a moment before you realize that you lost infinite moments, life as we know it...

Now you know what you feel

so, don't shout in your head only,

express your anger, hug your love

mesmerize the audience 

and die tomorrow...

Now you surrender to Him

and let the wind be your GPS,

fly to universe of brotherhood

and return with humanity

let them born again,...

Now you flow with tears of affection

continue to kill shades of hatred,

now you laugh on bliss inside

'cause next is future

when moment will be a past...

So, now is to be a life

and now is to be your karma,

now can you live

in solitude and in peace

and in love...

Reviews

[Perkele.7885]

You hit the nail my friend. Live the moment. Once the moment passes, it is gone...irreplaceable. How many does each person have? It is a toss-up question! Do not put off until tomorrow what you can experience together or with others today. Live the moment! When you have lived that moment, there will be time to return to your realities until your next necessary moment arrives!

[Gaurav]

Thank you for the insight and review. Appreciate it.

[Mary Christabel George]

Its a beautiful message to convey 'To live in the present'
It also touches the Karma account, humanity, peace & acting more than just inspecting in one stretch.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words.

[Anna]

It's very interesting, and I enjoyed reading it. :) Small piece of criticism: In your stanzas, I see things worded like the following.

"and return with humanity
let them born again,..."

It may be easier to read and comprehend quicker if the grammar was worked on a little. But overall, your work is very good and I liked it a lot. :)

[Gaurav]

Sure Anna. Thanks for suggesting the correction. I need to work on those aspects. Appreciate the review.

[Stan Lee]

Nice poem Gaurav. Well written, it flows well and has some deep thoughts. :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review. Appreciate it.

[andrew mitchell]

A good read with great emotions almost like I was reading Greek mythology tale, had that power to it but thats just me!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the compliment. Appreciate the gesture.

[dan]

This piece nicely illustrates how so many things can be occurring "now." Now is more than an instant, it is a culmination of events gathered in the same space in time. A very nicely written concept. take care...dan

[Gaurav]

Thank you so much Sir for the review. Appreciate it.

[Mister T.]

You don't know what you've got until you lose it, don't ya? ;)
"let the wind be your GPS" this was a great line, very creative metaphor. Besides that, I guess you're a fellow believer in karma? I believe in karma. All the choices you make decide which way you're life is going, so it's not more than logical that karma exists.
One thing I noticed while reading:
- "..now is to be a life": didn't you mean 'to be alive' instead of 'to be a life'? It sounds rather odd.
Besides that, nice poem, good read. Keep writing :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review.

No i meant it 'to be a life' only because i want to live a life in this moment only.

[Samaira]

It's a nice poem. I really like how you started. "Now you know how you feel, Don't shout in your head only." I think it's a quite a task to first know what you are feeling. Once you know that, expressing it is even more difficult.

[Gaurav]

Appreciate your kind words on the work. Thank you.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh boy...where do i start...the images in this are quite good..."let the wind be your GPS"
"express your anger/ hug your love"

they are all in a moment---all to do with Karma, and all to do with love.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for those kind words Jacob. Appreciate your visit.