Dear God

A prayer

Dear God,

There never was a universe

in truth or in illusion,

when it was all You

why we remained aloof?

Grief-stricken hearts of children

in loss of affection, Dear God

one of your traits die

when they cry in pain.

I saw birds falling on ground

and petals' color merging in dust,

when a man stood up against Bad

i saw people taking his blood out,

The creation of You is You

and they kill us

what then die is You,

don't mourn to see this all

do something

do something!!!

Reviews

[Draven]

I've come to realize that God never stops bad things from happening, due to the free will He gave us, and thus will even let us use to do harm with. However He will help heal any who have been hurt. Often times we blame him for things that happen to us or other people, but we forget that we live in a world that is mortal, and inevitably will face situations that have many flaws and imperfections.

I also have found that we as humans often ask for help without realizing what we are asking for. We ask a God who knows all, to help us and He does, but we have a set way that we believe we should be helped, and a certain time frame that we believe we should be helped in. This is also not the case. God knows when to move in, when to remain still. We expect Him to help us the way we think he should but usually He sees the bigger picture. So we tend to get upset when He doesn't seem to be helping us, however usually He is, just simply not the way we think.

[Gaurav]

Thank you for sharing your understanding on the topic. Appreciate it.

[Corbin Driver]

Great poem, I feel you expressed it in good wordage and it is greatly understandable!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[Mister T.]

Wow, impressive, immersive.
This actually makes quite a lot of sense if you think about it. You've made your point well. Only thing is that I'm not a believer really, excuse me for that, but I still agree with you.
One thing I wanted to mention, though: 'i saw people taking his blood out': don't forget the capital letter :)
Anyways, good work!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for taking out time to review the work. God is a concept of belief so if you believe in self as well, you are God too. Yeah sure i will edit the poem. Appreciate it.

[sansrity sinha]

very good write. good one. this is the question hovering in most minds since quite some time. nicely expressed in words! thanks for sharing.

[Gaurav]

Yes, there are questions that need lifetime to delve upon. We get the answer - it depends. Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it a lot.

[zunie frost]

i had the same question on my mind as Clifford had !!!!
any way poetry is good thanks for sharing such a lovely piece of work

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review. Appreciate the gesture.

[zunie frost]

welcome !!

[Jacob Clifford]

Is there anything that we can really say we understand? Why is life destroyed with such impunity? Does it mean nothing? Why is no action being taken to prevent it?

[Gaurav]

I was about to type answers for them. I just realised, i am an illiterate person in this. So i can just say that my friend i don't know and i am also seeking answers.