Dear God

A prayer

Dear God,

There never was a universe

in truth or in illusion,

when it was all You

why we remained aloof?

Grief-stricken hearts of children

in loss of affection, Dear God

one of your traits die

when they cry in pain.

I saw birds falling on ground

and petals' color merging in dust,

when a man stood up against Bad

i saw people taking his blood out,

The creation of You is You

and they kill us

what then die is You,

don't mourn to see this all

do something

do something!!!

Reviews

[Draven]

I've come to realize that God never stops bad things from happening, due to the free will He gave us, and thus will even let us use to do harm with. However He will help heal any who have been hurt. Often times we blame him for things that happen to us or other people, but we forget that we live in a world that is mortal, and inevitably will face situations that have many flaws and imperfections.

I also have found that we as humans often ask for help without realizing what we are asking for. We ask a God who knows all, to help us and He does, but we have a set way that we believe we should be helped, and a certain time frame that we believe we should be helped in. This is also not the case. God knows when to move in, when to remain still. We expect Him to help us the way we think he should but usually He sees the bigger picture. So we tend to get upset when He doesn't seem to be helping us, however usually He is, just simply not the way we think.

[Gaurav]

Thank you for sharing your understanding on the topic. Appreciate it.

[E.J. Michalec]

I feel the passion in this so deeply. The repetition of the last line is an absolutely beautiful element. Very, VERY well done.

[Gaurav]

Thank you Em..Your words means a lot.

[sinNsincerity]

This was deep Gaurav, God bless!

[Gaurav]

Thank you.

[ExquisiteEyes]

Very well written. I like the topic.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words.

[Emily]

Very well written!
I like the title too!
Keep it up!

[Gaurav]

Thank you Emily.

[Perkele.7885]

You appear to be angry with God! I would have to say that this anger is misplaced. GOD HAS YOUR BACK! You need to believe that before you will be able to feel and perhaps see that!

[Gaurav]

A truth is hidden and so philosophies are given. The poem was just another one of them. Thankyou for sharing your thoughts and reviewing the work. Appreciate the gesture.

[Dayran]

A timely message young Gaur ... such trying times we live in would match his own will for creation.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Sir for the review. Appreciate it.

[DeadSoulx_x]

Very nice. I like the emotion in the poem . beautiful

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for those kind words.

[Tobias H. Reese]

Indeed, do something, do something.
"...and petals' color merging in dust"

I like that line. :-) Thank you for sharing. Peace.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review. Appreciate it.

[Riddhi]

Really nice poem..Actually it tells you actual feelings....And i really enjoyed it..beautiful thoughts it has...Thanks for sharing...

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Riddhi for your kind words.