When we talk

There is no better way to love life than to love someone

I noticed Words beginning from You

and care getting affection,

when love became fatal

we talked and you closed my eyes...

Yes, we talk but know this

i fly to come back at you, my source,

it's not span of time

your Unknown beauty curves me...

You love those who can't express

the reason words flow from you,

you teach me to calm down

i want my river to immerse in you, my sea...

Yes, we talk but know this

you let me see layers of ego inside,

we will talk to eternity

making words infinite as my love is...

Reviews

[dan]

Gauravv, My first review of your work and I am immediately impressed. You have a way of TWISTING words; by that I mean the word is spelled the same and means approx. the same, but it's just a little bit OFF, and I mean that as a compliment. It's the twisting of tone and nuance, almost musical in element. Sorry I'm a bit behind with my read requests, but please to continue to send them to me, I'll get to them ASAP. Nicely written! take care...dan

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Dan for taking out time to review the work. Oh, it is not easy to read all requests but we have to because it shows our compassion for fellow brothers. So, thankyou again for this. Appreciate it a lot..

[Mira]

Fabulous job, Gauravv! I am very impressed with your style of writing, written well! I give this a 100/100. You are truly talented :)
Also, feel free to check out my page and review as well as rate my writings.

Regards,
Mira.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for taking out time to review the work. Appreciate it. Yeah sure i will feel glad to read your work :)

[Mira]

Thanks, review it too if you can :)

Mira.

[Crimson Apples]

Nice O-o
This really blew me away.
You did an awesome job, keep writing.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it a lot.

[zunie frost]

wow !!!!! such a heart provoking piece of work !!!!
really good and nicely done !!!!
well done

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for taking out time to review the work. Appreciate it.

[zunie frost]

welcome !!!!!

[Lilaa]

Great work, as always! keep it up and have a great new year :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words Lila. Appreciate it. Happy new year to you too :)

[jesserose99]

oh my goodness I enjoy this...the awareness you show is truly poignant. I am floored by the way you can put into words the communication to the divine that takes place when the deepest poetry pours from our souls onto the page.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou. I truly appreciate as you review my work and i am so lucky to find myself surrounded by compassionate and talented writers. I have to improve a lot. Thankyou again :)

[XX]

Great poem. Kind words!
I like it. :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[XX]

You're welcome.

[DeadSoulx_x]

Very very nice. Makes me smile. Awesome

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review. Appreciate it

[A.marie.speaks]

I like the way you describe the one you love, you make them larger than life and it is wonderful. You write about love very well and I commend you because that seems to me, one of the toughest subjects to illustrate. Lovely work!

[Gaurav]

Those are very motivating words. Thankyou for the review. Appreciate it a lot.

[A.marie.speaks]

You're welcome

[Jayashree Ghosh]

Beautiful lines...i loved everything about your poem...the more we talk the more we get to know each other...

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for the review. Appreciate it.