Music

life is a song

Exalted we were looking at stars

at the beginning of life

and red-shift of the universe...

Euphoria someone above understood

He realized happy upheaval in brain,

next came a power

and hence originated

'first note of our song'...

We sang in unison

we sang aloof

we sang in dreams

we sang...we sang..

Joyous we felt

when brothers grew

rejuvenating the mood

we sang songs anew..

We heard the song

in child's cry

we heard the song

in dust flying of deserts dry

we heard the song

when birds talked

we heard the song

when labors walked

The trail of life

got amused by Music,

because He communicates not

He sings along....

Reviews

[Lee Greatrex]

Hello this is my first review so please forgive if I make a hash of it, I usually do of everything I do and touch heee, they don't call me; Mr Bean for nothing.

I really enjoyed your music poem, it was fresh and laid out well and as I love music, rock and heavy metal with a bit of jazz and blues thrown in, I could appreciate it. I loved the part, we sang in unison, we sang aloof, we sang in dream, because I love singing and do anywhere and everywhere heee.
Well done and I really enjoyed it. I know how hard it is to write poems. I have done one for my granddad who loved gardening in his allotment. I look forward to reading your other work.
Keep writing.
Lee Greatrex

[Gaurav]

Hi Lee. That is so nice of you to review the work and especially sharing your feelings for music and poems. You are right, it is not easy to write poems and it is more difficult to express true feelings. So kudos to your talent. And thank you so much for those kind words. Appreciate it a lot.

[DeadSoulx_x]

Awesome. Music is amazing. I love it

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[usman]

nice write up,the message clearly stated..music is life

keep it up bro

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review Usman. Appreciate it a lot.

[iand63]

A language and voice in and of itself music will always intrigue and fascinate our minds and hearts. Good work Gauravv

[Gaurav]

Completely agree with you Sir. Music has a special place in all of us. Thankyou for your kind words.

[zunie frost]

Hello Gauravv !!
You got yourself a regular reader !! I'm your fann now !!
Your writings are really fantastic and this one is truely awsome
100% rateings from me !!
Well done

[Gaurav]

Hi...it is your humbleness...i need your kind review on my work so that i may improve on my skills...and you, my friend, have been regularly motivating me through your kind words...thankyou again for this...appreciate it :)

[zunie frost]

No neet to thanks my friend !!! You have also helped me alot and thats what friends do !:-P
i am also trying to improve

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

Really nice,
music our life,
nice written,
thanks for share,

[Gaurav]

Indeed. Music is our life. Thankyou for your kind review.

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

Your always welcome brother,keep it up

[Jacob Clifford]

Yes. Music is the expression of life. It has meaning in everything in existence.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind review Clifford....Appreciate it a lot :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, music is a beautiful thing...and we can play music that matches our moods so well...the beat of our lives.

[Gaurav]

Some, like me, can't imagine life without it Sir. Thankyou for the review.

[Knight Writer]

good work keep it up....music is always such a beautiful thng

[Gaurav]

Agree with you brother. Music is creator's voice. Thankyou for the review.

[Knight Writer]

always...welcome...

[XX]

The passion about music!
Well-written @Gauravv. :)
Keep it up.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou @Aerial but you spelled my 'real name' wrong haha :)
Appreciate your review..

[XX]

hahahaha lol :D
#changessaved ;)

[Gaurav]

we are cool :)

[XX]

indeed! :D lol

[Lilaa]

Beautifully written! Great work :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for your kind words. Appreciate it..