Music

life is a song

Exalted we were looking at stars

at the beginning of life

and red-shift of the universe...

Euphoria someone above understood

He realized happy upheaval in brain,

next came a power

and hence originated

'first note of our song'...

We sang in unison

we sang aloof

we sang in dreams

we sang...we sang..

Joyous we felt

when brothers grew

rejuvenating the mood

we sang songs anew..

We heard the song

in child's cry

we heard the song

in dust flying of deserts dry

we heard the song

when birds talked

we heard the song

when labors walked

The trail of life

got amused by Music,

because He communicates not

He sings along....

Reviews

[Lee Greatrex]

Hello this is my first review so please forgive if I make a hash of it, I usually do of everything I do and touch heee, they don't call me; Mr Bean for nothing.

I really enjoyed your music poem, it was fresh and laid out well and as I love music, rock and heavy metal with a bit of jazz and blues thrown in, I could appreciate it. I loved the part, we sang in unison, we sang aloof, we sang in dream, because I love singing and do anywhere and everywhere heee.
Well done and I really enjoyed it. I know how hard it is to write poems. I have done one for my granddad who loved gardening in his allotment. I look forward to reading your other work.
Keep writing.
Lee Greatrex

[Gaurav]

Hi Lee. That is so nice of you to review the work and especially sharing your feelings for music and poems. You are right, it is not easy to write poems and it is more difficult to express true feelings. So kudos to your talent. And thank you so much for those kind words. Appreciate it a lot.

[jesserose99]

ahh the sweet music of existence....and you painted it beautifully with your words my friend. I have really enjoyed your poetry. I love the mystical feel, as a tarot reader...you are opening my mind up as I read, a thoroughly enjoyable experience.

[Gaurav]

That's a very motivating review. I am very happy to find you enjoying the work. I just have words. Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[Mister T.]

As I would say: 'Music understands emotions better than we will ever be able to.'
Well, maybe you understand emotions better than music does. According to your writing, you do.

Well done!

[Gaurav]

But music does prompt a feeling inside that lead me to realise that i am human. So, its all Music. Thankyou for those kind words.

[MelissaAndres]

Music has so many meanings for so many different people. Country, rock, pop, etc. can evoke different emotions and feelings ... just like your poetry. Good job!

[Gaurav]

Totally agree with you. Music touch the soul. Thankyou so much for taking out time to review the work.

[MelissaAndres]

You're welcome!

[Riddhi]

Great work...I really enjoyed reading it and i especially like the beginning two stanzas of your poem...Keep it up...

[Gaurav]

Appreciate your constructive criticism on the work Riddhi. Thankyou :)

[Riddhi]

Welcome...Please do review my poem God is one....

[Uche Paul]

Nice. I admire the feel and flow.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou brother. Appreciate your review.

[J.A. Stevens]

Nice work I really enjoyed reading it everybody's music is important to them although everybody's music is so completely different yet every human being has music in them your piece seems to say that music began at the big bang a will go on to whatever end if so I agree 100% thanks for sharing

John

[Gaurav]

Thankyou John for the review. Appreciate it.

[FreedomFighter]

smooth transitions throughout the whole piece, i enjoyed it

[Gaurav]

Thankyou brother for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[A.marie.speaks]

So lovely. Life is a song, the earth and the universe created with a melody of love and rebirth. Reminded me of c.s. lewis's magician's nephew; when Aslan sings the entire world into being.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for the review. I am glad you could connect the work with one of the great poets' work. I appreciate the gesture. Means a lot.

[sansrity sinha]

i enjoyed the poem as i read along!
lovely!
keep it up!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Sansrity for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[Girl With A Pen]

I enjoyed reading this...or should I say singing this! Every word rolls of the tongue and every image is painted in my mind. Wonderful! Thank you for sharing

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for your kind words. Appreciate the gesture.