Music

life is a song

Exalted we were looking at stars

at the beginning of life

and red-shift of the universe...

Euphoria someone above understood

He realized happy upheaval in brain,

next came a power

and hence originated

'first note of our song'...

We sang in unison

we sang aloof

we sang in dreams

we sang...we sang..

Joyous we felt

when brothers grew

rejuvenating the mood

we sang songs anew..

We heard the song

in child's cry

we heard the song

in dust flying of deserts dry

we heard the song

when birds talked

we heard the song

when labors walked

The trail of life

got amused by Music,

because He communicates not

He sings along....

Reviews

[Lee Greatrex]

Hello this is my first review so please forgive if I make a hash of it, I usually do of everything I do and touch heee, they don't call me; Mr Bean for nothing.

I really enjoyed your music poem, it was fresh and laid out well and as I love music, rock and heavy metal with a bit of jazz and blues thrown in, I could appreciate it. I loved the part, we sang in unison, we sang aloof, we sang in dream, because I love singing and do anywhere and everywhere heee.
Well done and I really enjoyed it. I know how hard it is to write poems. I have done one for my granddad who loved gardening in his allotment. I look forward to reading your other work.
Keep writing.
Lee Greatrex

[Gaurav]

Hi Lee. That is so nice of you to review the work and especially sharing your feelings for music and poems. You are right, it is not easy to write poems and it is more difficult to express true feelings. So kudos to your talent. And thank you so much for those kind words. Appreciate it a lot.

[Neytri]

Music, a really important part of my life. Maybe that's why I could relate to it so well.
Great job..:)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for the review :)

[Neytri]

You're welcome :)

[Emily]

I loved it!
Very well written!
Keep it up!!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review Emily.

[Dayran]

A great companion to life ... entertains ... communicates ... and is finally a friend. Its the music of creation. Makes us think someday we might dance as we walk.

[Gaurav]

True Sir. Music is all that is all prevalent and is a language of creation. Thankyou for those kind words. Appreciate it.

[Corbin Driver]

Music, soother of life in my eyes. Great work!!

[Gaurav]

Rightly said. Music does soothe the life. Thankyou for the review.

[Willard Wells]

Music plays into our life and memories. A song brings memories flooding back. Well done.

[Gaurav]

Yes Williard. Music is a bridge between present and past. Appreciate your review.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow! Its a beautiful piece, Gaurav!
I felt the cosmic musings in between the lines of your words!
The concept is awesome!

Very well penned!
Kudos!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much Jyoti. May it happen that we find cosmic musings in every being. Then we will prosper in true sense. Appreciate your kind words.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome!

[dan]

The sounds of any day or mood may immediately make itself available to be set to music. I walk around with the soundtrack of my life playing in the background of my memories, perfectly tuned to the correct genre and rhythm. A very nice interpretation of life's musical accompaniment. Keep singing, Gauravv! take care...dan

[Gaurav]

That's commendable Dan. If our life flow as serene music does, the harmony will prevail in minds. Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[ExquisiteEyes]

The power of music and its beauty can never be questioned.
Good one

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review. Appreciate it a lot.

[StellaMaria]

I really like this one, especially the word combo "when labors walked" It has me intrigued about where that thought came from. I always find the little things to focus on.

[Gaurav]

Yeah music is rooted in every soul and gives inspiration to unfortunate as well. Thank you..