It's kinda Love

It's about emotions, more than that it's Nature

I blame her audacity

for she occupied my thought,

her face got stuck

in the heart of my brain...

I look into my eyes

and find her soul,

i'll cease to exist

in love or without...

I walk miles

carrying her image,

she rests in me

but i am restless in love...

Silence is my home

in the city of crowds,

They say 'i am in love'

i nod in my head...

Reviews

[XX]

Feelings -- the ingredient of this poem! :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for the review. Appreciate it.

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

Really nice words"i am in love",its presenting your love life,
really nice,
thanks for share,
keep it up.....

[Gaurav]

Thankyou brother.

[Mahi sain(Mahesh)]

Your always welcome my brother,

[Crimson Apples]

I loved the first verse =)
It's relatable, and your feelings are cleat to see.
Great work!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it a lot.

[Crimson Apples]

No problem =)

[DeadSoulx_x]

Very nice. It really does paint a picture of someone in love. The flow is very nice, just like the flow of love in your veins when you see the love of your life

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for taking out time to review the work. Appreciate it.

[Jenna Kay]

I really love this! It gave me that floating feeling of how one feels when they really love someone. Beautiful piece!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[andrew mitchell]

Trapped inside your head the lovely highs and emotional lows that come with love, not thinking straight and the space she occupies in thought. I like this pieced, made me laugh on reflecting

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review Andrew. Appreciate it much.

[Jacob Clifford]

This is very relatable. Love is a force that can build or destroy just about anything. It is one of the most intense emotions a person can feel.

[Gaurav]

Well said Clifford. Love is the grand power. Thankyou for your words.

[Knight Writer]

so...you are in love.....this reflects that
great work....waiting for next episode of this love story!!!!

[Gaurav]

I am in love with 'unknown girl' my friend. Even i am waiting for the next. Thank you for your review. Appreciate it.

[FreedomFighter]

this represents the sorrows of love and its spiritual path, well done

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it.