It's kinda Love

It's kinda Love

A Poem by Gaurav
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It's about emotions, more than that it's Nature

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I blame her audacity
for she occupied my thought,
her face got stuck
in the heart of my brain...

I look into my eyes
and find her soul,
i'll cease to exist
in love or without...

I walk miles
carrying her image,
she rests in me
but i am restless in love...

Silence is my home
in the city of crowds,
They say 'i am in love'
i nod in my head...

© 2015 Gaurav


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Those words are really beautiful.Lovely poem, Gaurav!Where you in love when you wrote this?

Posted 6 Years Ago


Gaurav

6 Years Ago

Hey thank you..no that wasn't love..might have been a crush though..love takes time..a lot :)
Beautiful poem Gaurav. Meaningful and lovely flow. I enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing your heart to us my friend 😊💛
-Angelina 🖤

Posted 6 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your sweet words Angelina :)
A.G.

6 Years Ago

You are very welcome my friend 😊
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Arf! meow.
Is love a game to be conquered or a thing you hope to find?


"and all I hear is crickets" would be my last line if I wrote this.

(mind and body strong, grasshopper)

I'm sure you read this review with disdain. (for superficial reasons) coming from me.


Posted 6 Years Ago


Gaurav

6 Years Ago

No worries. Thank you for your words :)
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Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Wait... what's going on here? Who the hell is Angela16? There is a logical disconnect taking place.. read more
"Silence is my home in the city of crowds" is a great line. Nice poem!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Gaurav

6 Years Ago

Ohh yes that's somehow got into my head :)
thank you
Love is all-consuming and powerful. And beautiful at times.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Gaurav

6 Years Ago

thank you for your sweet words
Onlyme

6 Years Ago

my pleasure. 😊
Love is and should be the source of all- with love all is possible where two hearts and souls become one- wonderful words🌹

Posted 6 Years Ago


Gaurav

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your sweet words. Thank you
‘Thoughts In Time’🌹

6 Years Ago

Always a pleasure🌹
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dan
Love can be a trippy experience, sometimes very confusing. Your write would seem to indicate some of that explicitly. Very nicely done. take care...dan

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav

8 Years Ago

Thank you Dan for the awesome review. Appreciate the gesture.
I enjoy your wording. It as if I can see the "city of crowds". Very descriptive.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav

8 Years Ago

Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it.
Great poem!
Lovely wording!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav

8 Years Ago

Thankyou for the review. Appreciate it.
Great job, words very well understood!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gaurav

8 Years Ago

Thankyou :)

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Added on December 25, 2015
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