When in Need

For those, who give life a hard fight in adversities

Sometimes you wonder 

what they are made of?

obstacles can't haunt them

pain remains aloof from body...

They eat love

and digest hope,

entangled to thinned silk

of cloths and home

they build dense kindness...

In love with nature

and its flaws,

novice to happiness

they learn in adversities..

Tormented for black smile

disgusted for diseases

ridiculed for words

their death is neglected..

But when they rise

sun sets anxiously,

bones of greatness

life of inspiration

i know they are made of...

Reviews

[zunie frost]

Great poem and perfect massage of hope. Thanks for sharing

[dan]

Gaurav, This piece should send signs of hope to anyone whose life is filled with adversities. There is an old saying that goes like this: "It's not how many times you get knocked down that matters, it's how many times you get back on your feet." This piece is in the same spirit. Very nicely done! take care...dan

[Emily]

I really liked it!
Keep on writing!!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words Emily. Appreciate it.

[jesserose99]

So interesting....unexpected this piece. I like your whole thought process...very nice write.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for the review. Appreciate it.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

They eat love
and digest hope,
entangled to thinned silk
of cloths and home
they build dense kindness...

Another lovely work from you... you have presented it very subtly .....good one...

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Anurag for kind words. Appreciate it.

[Neha Sharma]

Amazingly composed. Beautiful, enlightening, and inciting narrative.
And then there is this lovely line, "They eat love and digest hope."
Keep writing. :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much Neha. It means a lot :)

[Willard Wells]

Interesting concept. Nice flow and good imagery. Well done.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Sir for your kind words. Appreciate it.

[A.marie.speaks]

Beautiful piece. Those who conquer adversity are always the kindest, I believe. Your perspective is inspiring

[Gaurav]

Yes, completely agree with your point. Thankyou so much for you kind words. Appreciate it.

[zunie frost]

Hello !
Great work!! Nicely written!! Love this :-)
80 points

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for your kind words. Appreciate it much.

[zunie frost]

Was my pleasure

[MelissaAndres]

You are a very good writer. Keep up the wonderful work!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Melissa. Those kind words mean a lot.

[MelissaAndres]

You are so welcome! :)