Weaknesses

I am made of less than ordinary matter. It makes me weak.

Words are my strength

everything else is weakness,

i strive to survive

on my cowardice will...

I sugar quoted You

to find my worth,

in far-far inner core

my inadequacies shout...

Don't come closer

nor kiss my eyes,

i am inferior

in body and soul...

Some lives later

i hope to relive,

with ingredients of love

when I will be made...

Reviews

[mou]

it is not the weakness but greatness of heart.nice flow

[Gaurav]

Thank you for those kind words.

[gunjan]

well written dear,,,,
just wanna say one thing....
"shabd tumhaari taaqat hai,
per kehte ho kamzor ho,
mutthi main duniya jakad rakkhi hai,
muthhi khule toh roshni uss aur ho.....

This is you are...!!!!!

[Gaurav]

Thank you Gunjan. Keep writing.

[dan]

Your choice of words makes your writing resonate like thunder claps. Your imagery and word play absorb the energy and spread it throughout the poem so smoothly. You cover all types of style so well. Very well done. take care...dan

[Gaurav]

Thank you Dan for the beautiful review.

[Woody]

the meek/week shall inherit the earth. nice one Gaurav. beautifully penned.

[Gaurav]

Thank you for the review Woody.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Bravo!!!
amazing write.........i believe all weaknesses are beautiful.........
very well crafted.....
i loved it!!!
:)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for those kind words. Appreciate it.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you're welcome..........!!! :) :)

[Neytri]

After reading this, I'm not at all ready to accept that you are weak... Its fabulous, I live it.

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for the review Neytri :)

[jesserose99]

very unique...I like the way you think...outside of the box for sure!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much for your kind words.

[Emily]

I really liked the second stanza!
Keep it up!!

[Gaurav]

Thankyou Emily for taking out time to review the work. Appreciate it.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Lovely poem....
i strive to survive
on my cowardice will
So very well written with a beautiful flow....

[Gaurav]

Thankyou brother. Appreciate your kind words.

[Arshia]

I really liked the flow of the poem and how beautifully you portrayed the fears and weaknesses of a common man.
This mere acceptance makes the speaker so brave and wonderful! Great write :)

[Gaurav]

Thankyou so much Arshia. This is really a kind comment from you. Appreciate it :)