Adobe of Happiness

Don't talk of Sea while remaining inside the 'Well'

I suspected I had lived there

There, the adobe of happiness

Where stars came and played in the garden

A bliss of infinite

A gaze of almighty

An escape of death

Nothing short of perfection bestowed upon me

I think I had lived there

A moment came

When I looked outside

When a perception of independence

In the form of bondage

Dreamt on my soul

I cursed stars, I built my image

The image I referred ‘God’

I cursed love, I built my definition

The words I referred ‘Hatred’

I cursed universe, I built my world

The world I referred ‘earth’

I cursed sea, I went far

Choose a well to stay alive

Now, I see sky

With wonder with two of my eyes

I already had cursed my infinite

When I was a sky

I suspected I hadn’t lived there

Reviews

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Lovely poem....what a beautiful flow......

I cursed universe, I built my world
The world I referred ‘earth’
I cursed sea, I went far
Choose a well to stay alive

These lines clearly stand out.... a real good one

[Gaurav]

Thank you Anurag. Respect and appreciate your review :)

[CA Anurag Sharma]

You are welcome Gaurav :)

[Riddhi]

nice poem... the fact told in this poem i to agree with it...

[Gaurav]

Thankyou for those kind words. Appreciate it :)

[Gaurav]

People here are happy in their own world. They talk about spreading love, respecting women and giving freedom to children. But you know what this is all 'bullshit'. When time comes their own prejudices, they use it against their loved ones too. How childish is the society!!!

[Mister T.]

Unfortunately I 100% agree with that.. You could say human's nature is to be self-interested. That's not true in my opinion, it's the society that makes us self-interested.