Who are You?

A God is a mysterious subject but it can be felt when we grasp the truth - a truth of self

Who are You?

You, behind the illusion

Illusion that hides the self

And blur reality!

You, where is your adobe?

Is it in heart or

Is it all-pervasive?

Some moments

When You shine

And let us perceive You,

a truth rises

that kills the

ignorance of ages!

A beam of light

Dreamt only

I saw in real

Within You!

Who are You?

A God of body

Or assimilation of souls

You seem to hide

But they say

You are evident!

Was it You

Who died to make us?

I think so!

I have seen the birth

Of light

On the death of anger!

Don’t cave inside

Its dark there

And its dark we are living in,

Only You can

Propel the light

And fill the darkness

With hope!

I know who You are,

You believed in self

When faith wasn’t born

It’s You who shine

Through me and my universe!

Reviews

[zunie frost]

so beautifully written !!!
Its dark there
And its dark we are living in,
Only You can
Propel the light
And fill the darkness
With hope!
I know who You are,
You believed in self
When faith wasn’t born
It’s You who shine
Through me and my universe!
these lines are so natural and sweet !!!!
100 points

[Gaurav]

Thank you :) you know i love this poem too. I got lost in vacuum of thoughts after writing it. Thanks again :)

[zunie frost]

wow !!!! writers only need a pen ,page ans peace !!!!! there are no limits how high you can go !!!

[Onlyme]

A profound write. That no other words need to be said.

[Teresa]

Ha i am little late...but nice words, good choice to, I enjoyed this one I belive the most:)

"Always believe in you" M.J

-Teresa aka Luna

[Sanjeeta Sharma Pokhar..]

Awaken! thoughtful and beautiful.

[Verse]

I have seen the birth
Of light
On the death of anger!

These are wonderful words, teaching us how to incorporate God’s love into daily living.
Beautiful!!! :):)

V

[Gaurav]

Thank you for the review V :)

[Verse]

My pleasure, Gaurav!!