Bath

My body is bathed in
Shadowed sunlight
Filtering in from
Open window
Each curve of skin
A beautiful arch
Each dip a secret spot
Where hide my
Thoughts
Hopes
Dreams
For only me to know


© M/Gatlianne 2009

Reviews

[Wharton]

It's a beautiful image of nature highlighting God's greatest creation: The human form. But your poem exceeds in explaining more, that though the outward beauty is seen, that which is inside, remains hidden. I was a beautiful poem.