Veins

Veins

A Poem by Gatlianne

VEINS

 

 

My arms are stained by distrust

Rolling through my veins

Pulsing blue black

Like a bruise

With each ragged heartbeat

A journey of pain back to a heart

That has felt too much

To release

 

 

 

© M/Gatlianne 2007

© 2009 Gatlianne


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I read this a couple of times. Once straight through, the second time stanza by stanza taking in the beauty of it and the picture it paints. I can almost feel a ragged breath with each stanza. Very powerful. Great work.

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Gatlianne
Gatlianne

Athens, AL



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Described by some as an alien disguised as a beautiful earthling woman, inner peace in human form, and a tiny ball of fire, Gatlianne knew at a young age that she was different from her peers. Growin.. more..

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