Simple Things Turned Complicated

Wrote this a while back :)

[Verse 1]

Are you proud of what you've done
Having ruined what was once fun
And I guess that there must be some fault in me
Some subtle signs I did not see
Now only the stars will know, that what we had was gold
Till the day you packed your bags, and made the long way home

[Bridge]

And home, isn't where his heart is, anymore
The hardest punches never left me feeling this sore

[Chorus]

Now, every thing's lost under the sun
Are you proud of what you've done
Now, the road ahead is crystal clear
You are nowhere close to near
The simplest things turned complicated
'Cause someone forgot the tag, that said we were outdated

[Verse 2]

You can leave but don't dare run
When the spinning stops, I will come
And I guess that there must be some fault in you
Blind to the signs that I loved you
You gave me your cold shoulder, said your heart was sold
And then you packed your bags, and took the long way home

[Bridge 2]

And home, isn't where his heart is, anymore
A sudden emptiness, left me begging for more

[Chorus x2]

 

 

Reviews

[Rachael]

looks like it would become a really good song!
i wish i had some idea of how the music would sound.
Nicley written and good use of rhyming.