Obliviously!

don't you get
weird on
me
and
do
kiss me like you
mean it
because i've
seen it,
i've seen it
once before
don't you dare
say you love me
if it's not
honestly
stated
but i believe it
things left
doubted
are the things
unstated
so let's talk
about it
you know i love
you all
authoritative
i'll kiss
those dimpes
and you'll
kiss this
squint
make amends
before day ends
because this is not
worth fighting over
however,
fighting for
for sure

Reviews

[Dimpe]

"i'll kiss
those dimpes
and you'll
kiss this
squint"

Cute. I'm on board.

[darkgurl]

I like this write this is wonderful, cute write.

[oranges_melt]

oo i like that! so cute. very original.

[Emily Rose]

This is great. I really like the lack of punctuation and the way I'm forced to read the thing as a run-on sentence. The stream-of-consciousness makes the flow really nice and one thought slips easily into the next, although there's enough ambiguity there to make it interesting. Your in-and-out use of rhyme adds a nice punch to the poem too, and I love the title XD One small critique, however: I think the word "amends" only has one "m" in it. Great job!