The Ghosts of Jim Beam, Hank Williams and me

The Ghosts of Jim Beam, Hank Williams and me

A Poem by Gaston

Late one night
a VCR flashed 12:00
[blink]

12:00
[blink]
12:00
[it's all subliminal]


I was sitting,
drinking, thinking,
listening to an ancient relic
of a record player

(funny that, isn't it?)

When a man
"Dressed like 1950,
half-drunk and hollow-eyed"
walked through my door

(it amazes me to say
I'm being literal)

He took a seat
had a drink
and sang me a song or two

(smiling at me
like we were old friends)

and like this we sat
said ne'er a word
but sang of
men with broken hearts
and lost highways

(for maybe an
hour or four)

Then someone tapped
my shoulder, rather softly
and I turned
rather slowly

(and in turning saw that
drunken way the world slides by)

A figure of a man
bearded majestically
in a black broadcloth suit

(a cowboy on a
sunday afternoon)

He says we've had enough
his bottles quite empty
this is not the last time
you will see us

(the ghosts of Jim Beam,
Hank Williams, and me)

© 2009 Gaston


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I'd say you had some pretty good company there. I used to get those visitations, too.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The title caught me cause I am a big Hank Williams fan... I really enjoyed this... the fantasy brought on by alcoholic thoughts. Vivid imagery and well played out.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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