Forsaken word

Forsaken word

A Poem by Gaspar

It stood with nothing but a sound
     Just a whisper that circled around
It was only then It could have ever existed
    For all that herd It would be enlisted
Falling down as an apple from a tree
    They felt one another's misery 

Children screaming, avoiding Its embrace
Yet to everyone else, It had a bitter taste
It holds the truth, It takes a life
It makes us tremble from a thought of light
Whatever others spoke, what they claimed to know
You face a doubt which consumes your soul.

© 2013 Gaspar


Author's Note

Gaspar
I felt like writing a poem today..

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I really liked this piece. It almost seemed it was about a dark rumor?. Idk we all have our own perspectives. Either way i loved it!(: btw thanks for the review(:

Posted 11 Years Ago


Gaspar

11 Years Ago

Thanks and no problem.. :)
Kesha

11 Years Ago

Your welcome :)
This is quite deep :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Gaspar

11 Years Ago

Thanks :)
Have you, by any chance, wrote this of religion? That's all that comes to mind.
Nonetheless, I enjoyed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Gaspar

11 Years Ago

The main theme is death, although religion has its part here. Considering that it was partially acce.. read more

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Gaspar
Gaspar

Zagreb, Croatia



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I write in free time as an emotional outlet, I don't post alot of my work because I never think it's good enough for others to see it. And perhaps this is an excuse because I don't want people to see .. more..

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