I Could Say This, But I Won't

I could say your eye is a leaf
that falls from the branch, but flies in the wind
I could say this, but I won't.

As no words can carry fair weight
to purge the emptiness from my soul
you will only ever hear me say, I love you.

It may be that you need me to show you
or even just to tell you every day
these words are all I say, I love you.

The chocolate syrup dripping from your eyes
swims to your smile's side, to taste you
I could say this, but I won't

For all the days you're by my side
and all the nights of starry skies
I shall only ever say, I love you in every way.

Reviews

[AndrejPro]

Beautiful and amazing, the choice of words, especially the "chocolate syrup" part. Wow!

[emmajoy]

Your use of words really is like an artist finding the right lines and colours, pastel soft or oil thick: you build up the words as with a painting, finishing with that beautiful flourish in the final line. Wonderful!

[deeps]

I like this I think this is quite the write here.
Amazing write more like it.

[Jenny Nelson]

Beautiful! So wonderfully descriptive and romantic. Great write!

[cest la vie]

Did I read your bio correctly? You said you write "simple writes"?
My dear, this is far from simple. When you use lines like
"I could say your eye is a leaf
that falls fromthe branch, but flies in the wind"

Not simple writing. Wonderful writing..

[Helen Crutchett]

How beautiful Gary. Romantic and endearing!
Helena