A Work Of Art

A Work Of Art

A Poem by Gary McDonald

Don't tell me lies, I can feel you lying
look in my eyes, just as I'm dying
taste my tears, when it is you who is crying
grasp my hand, I'll take you flying.

All these things are yours, if you let them
now see my soul and touch my heart
as together, we are simply, a work of art.

© 2009 Gary McDonald


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Gary the images are there...guess I have to sift through to get them to be......I searched for the work of Art which at the end dawned into a hypothetical reality....Here is the puzzling part..Art normally begins form tangibility.......here they end in what could be.....You have changed the perspective from which Art is experienced, and this is art before us. Well done here. I admire the technique in this piece.

Best regards,
Vincent

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Gary McDonald
Gary McDonald

Crawley, West-Sussex, United Kingdom



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