Crawl:Quit ; Broken Hand:Lost Grip

This piece means a lot to me. Lots of overcoming had to be done to get here so, here.

I CAN'T REMEMBER THE LAST TIME I FELT SERINE.

NO AMBITION, NO HOPE, JUST A LITTLE FAITH

AND MY FRIENDS TO KEEP MY HEAD CLEAN.

I CAN FEEL IT COMING ON AGAIN:

CLUELESSNESS, DEPRESSION, AND RESENTMENT

WHAT AM I DOING HERE?

THERE'S MORE TO LIFE THAN THIS

I'M NOT SURE WHAT IT IS.

WHERE AM I GOING? WHO AM I SUPPOSED TO BE?

EVERYONE I'VE LOVED IN MY LIFE, I'VE PUSHED AWAY AND BETRAYED

YOU CAN'T FEEL ANYTHING WHEN YOU'VE BEEN MADE THIS WAY.

I'M TRYING, AS HARD AS I POSSIBLY CAN,

TO SMILE EVERY ONCE IN A WHILE,

WITHOUT FORCING IT ON MY FACE.

GOD OF BENEVOLANCE, WHY AREN'T YOU ON MY SIDE?

CAN YOU FEEL MY HATE? CAN YOU FEEL MY PAIN?

WHY WON'T YOU DO ANYTHING?

I'VE GIVEN UP ON EVERYTHING.

EVERY SINGLE THING I'VE BEEN TAUGHT IN MY LIFE HAS BEEN A LIE

AND I'M SICK OF THIS HATE AND DEPRESSIVE ANXIETY.

I'M FINDING A PLACE WHERE I CAN SLEEP IN PEACE.

FOR 5 YEARS I HELD ONTO THIS MISERY

AND I'M READY--

 

 

-TO BE SET FREE-

 

 

I'M LEARNING TO LET GO OF EVERYTHING THAT HAS BROUGT ME PAIN

AND I'LL PUSH THROUGH ANYTHING THAT COMES MY WAY

I'LL FIGHT WITH BROKEN BONES TO KEEP EVERYTHING I LOVE CLOSE

I'LL CRAWL BEFORE I QUIT, I'LL BREAK MY HANDS BEFORE I LOSE GRIP

 

I'M FINE.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

You really turn this on in the end...after the line:

AND I'M READY--
-TO BE SET FREE-

you question for answers and then in the end the answers are in you to achieve them...seems a personal reflection...raw and downright expressive thoughts to paper....

and for the fun stuff we all like editing:

YOU CAN'T FEEL ANYTHING WHE YOU'VE BEEN MADE THIS WAY.
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YOU CAN'T FEEL ANYTHING WHEN YOU'VE BEEN MADE THIS WAY.

good to read this one of yours...gets at the heart of it all...

[Sami Khalil]

"NO AMBITION, NO HOPE, JUST A LITTLE FAITH

AND MY FRIENDS TO KEEP MY HEAD CLEAN.

I CAN FEEL IT COMING ON AGAIN:

CLUELESSNESS, DEPRESSION, AND RESENTMENT

WHAT AM I DOING HERE?"
A very good question . A good poem...:)

[Laminators Dubai]

its full of everything!!!!!!!!
its another splendid write from you...
thanks for sharing your words...^^