Dancing on water

Dancing on water

A Poem by Pure life

Dancing on water:

This isn't just a thing you do,
its the way that you do it.
For those that inbrace this,
i hope that you live well.

So many steps toward the ending,
mess up on a single step can be fatal.
Missing a step will through you back,
down through the deep cold water.

Though some how you make it halfway,
but how to figure out the rest.
If you could see your partners face in the darkness,
you wonder what will come out of this in the end.

At the last step,
you through the darkness.
You see what the prize was at the end,
It was true love.

Dancing will give you hope,
and for the ones that love you.
This will be the last chance,
so keep your beat and stay on harmony.

© 2009 Pure life


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I feel this in my heart as it speaks to the truths in my life,h however even in darkness I am held in the light of love.
Sharing from experiences knowing that no storm is strong enough to take away true love so keep dancing friend!
Great expression shared! ~ Jude - :-)
PS love the username ~ namaste!

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Added on February 19, 2009

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