My Darling

My Darling

A Poem by Douglas Levi Gribbins
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I'm a victim of abuse, so this is how i vent.

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One time you were telling me.
That I was your biggest fantasy
Now you look me in the eyes
And beg that this is all a dream.

Darling, do you like these voices
That echo throughout these halls
My dear, do you hear these noises
I think they are coming from the walls..

I'm tortured, a puppet and I love it.
But there's something that I covet.
I want the sound of piano keys
Playing around me, drowning me.

Crowding in me is the sound of the
Monsters crawling where i'm bound to sleep
Whispering wisps while monsters growl from out of me.
Shouting is the demons, hell hounds that speak

(Chorus)
My Darling! Do you hear these voices like I do?
My Darling! Do you see what I have grown to see
You're my darling! But please don't ever think to leave
But you're my darling...my darling...
(Chorus end)

© 2014 Douglas Levi Gribbins


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I enjoyed the poem. I like poetry joyous with love and happiness.
"My Darling! Do you hear these voices like I do?
My Darling! Do you see what I have grown to see
You're my darling! But please don't ever think to leave
But you're my darling...my darling..."
The above lines were my favorite. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


It is wonderful write dear friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amazing job! So much passion

Posted 10 Years Ago


Good that you are sharing pain finally. Let it go until a new you is born who you are supposed to be.

Posted 10 Years Ago


wonderful job on this greatly said . and had a great flow and said with great passion i think you did a amazing job on this poem keep up the good work

Posted 10 Years Ago


I think it is a bold thing to write such out to be viewed, I find poetry is a sacrifice at times, a little part of ourselves is given each time we write our emotions out....hopefully healing in some way x

Posted 10 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 13, 2014
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Tags: Death, Dismemberment, Not Insurance, Personal


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