Rage Against the Pen (Part 2)

Continuation of my past writing of the same name I reference my old songs here.

Pain don't cease, No peace for the one's in peices

Already deceased, not pleased with it's multiple diseases

This ain't Xavier Fox, It's your man who's talking

My life is a board, and now I demand the chalk

 

And i'm a soldier..fighting the wars of your life

By your life i mean i'm slowly ending mine with a knife.

It's pressure you can only measure on the rictor scale

But not even this neverending earthquake can make me fail

 

Not even eighteen, you talk like your twenty

It's all the same scene, but it was never funny

Not a candidate but you're about to running

The speed of how I rev this chainsaw is surely stunning

 

You're voice is loud and clearer even as a whisper, I can hear you talking

You hear footsteps in hall, but you're barely walking

Look behind you, It's your past taking the role of karma

You're tears show it your fear, and fear can peirce all armor

 

This is my 60th writing in the cafe, and 60 more to go

I haven't found my mind yet, so continue the show

I've lost it, My sanity covered in frost yet

When i wanna shed blood it's comes straight from the faucet

 

Dark lies, Angels

Red eyes, Chainsaws

Back to the past, Like you think I've forgotten?

I've got my whole life to put myself on the spotted.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

I go pretty hard on this xD

Reviews

[Dark Poet]

Plenty of anger and emotion in this piece. Somehow you make sadness and wrath delicate but painfully sharp

[Coyote Poetry]

"This is my 60th writing in the cafe, and 60 more to go
I haven't found my mind yet, so continue the show"
Song writing and poetry. Always trying to find something new. Hard life for people seeking the perfect words and thoughts. I liked the poem. Had the feel of real thoughts and struggle. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Rana]

You've been so dang witty with the words in here! Had some fun reading this. Yeah, you've come so far, and got so much better. Keep writing >.

[blondie45]

A lot of emotion in this :)

[BloodApocalypse]

wow so much emotion in this piece :)

[Matching Socks]

Whoa, very dark and angry.
I can definitely hear this with some heavy music behind it.
Really hurt wrenching in spots, kinda scary in others...
The emotions really come across.