No Surrender

I chat with my demons.

I wouldn't pay to be famous, everyone trying to match it.

I ain't got a shovel, I can't bury the hatchet."

But somehow My hole keeps getting deeper

All these demons controlling me, like zoo-keepers

 i'd try to walk with them, talk with them, 

No "Woe is me" 

"But who is the

Guy who wrote like he told he could control it?

You're too weak for me, you and me both know it!""

I can't believe my past led to you to control me

"But now That  part passed, You're happy, you owe me"

Show me a document, where i had signed up for this!

"Look at this, in your blood, See that black line? it's over it.

But it wasn't my fault that you made the choices that you made."

Was it my vulnerability, or my misery that made you stay?

My shoulders feel like my world is ending.

And if you can't let go, then i'll take you with me.

Blowing your mind aswell as mine, both literally

All this pain your giving me is hell, but i live it willingly.

Rather me than someone else, If i can live through what i felt

For now it's all over, I've lit the fuse

But if this kills me, it kills you too.

No surrender...

Author's Note

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Reviews

[JannyHatch]

I absolutely loved this! I was hooked throughout. You're incredibly talented. Well done!

[Sophy Freebirds]

I loved the theme because that.is what i have been doing for last somedays. I will say that if you could break it into well.developed stanzas it would be great..i also got confused while following the convo. As to which part is which.. you would better be more clear. But given your age i must say you are a smart cookie. :) keep honing your skills. God bless yaa

~Sophy

[Ruth]

Hard hitting, full throttle...you convey with a lot of emotion...allows the reader to see the fragments that make the whole xo

[Shitsune Hyuuga]

I could really feel the feelings you're trying to convey in here. Such a wonderful poem with lots of emotion. Good Job!

[misha]

Your emotions show wonderfully through every piece of writing I have read of yours. This is another wonderful piece that was heavy with emotion. You did a great job!

[jennifer little]

nice write i enjoyed it you expressed it very well keep up the good work