No more tears.

No more tears...

No more tears..

No more tears i say as i cross my fears.

No more tears

Open your ears..

For the piano plays as it's coming near...

Promise me...

Follow me

Into the dark

Show me the beast you truly are.

You will see.

As i unleash

The demons i kept inside of me..

Tears i bare.

But no one cared.

Until i dissapeared to air.

Inside i scream

Outside i dream.

I kiss black roses as they sing..

No more tears...

No more tears..

No more tears i say as i cross my fears.

No more tears

Open your ears..

For the piano plays as it's coming near...

Promise me...

Reviews

[Sibusiso Xtdo Gama]

"Show me the beast you truly are.
You will see.
As i unleash
The demons i kept inside of me.." from the rest of the poem i am taken by this piece, it is always good to be aware of what you put urself into and be armed for it..awesome.

Bring a beast i give you Demons

[Ghost Writer]

I really love this I think it would make an amazing song, it's really great. Thanks for sending it to me

[Jack Wolfe]

Hey, Douglas, I remember you telling me you write song lyrics, and I'm not the best one for reviewing music, there are several that can contest to that. When I first saw the request and title I thought Ozzie. I tried to read this as if put to music . . . it has good rhythm and flow, but there's only one verse encased in the chorus, is this just a snippet?

[Douglas Levi Gribbins]

It's a work in progress