Suicide Symphony

A dark poem i wrote

Tears fall, blood sheds,
Both sides, both dead.
Eyes consumed in shadows.
Heart gone, from a black rose.

A garden of fed souls
Dead friends, Dead foes.
A kiss from Satan won't shake me.
But When i'm loved, wake me

Bloody mirrors, Death stares
Consume the light, in dark glares
Backwards suicide symphony's
Will forever stay inside, killing me

Reviews

[Luna Zerimar]

"Backwards suicide symphony's. Will forever stay inside, killing me."

Those two lines. Amazing.

"Dead friends. Dead foes."

I interpret that as that you are dead. And not them.

[Emmy Cannon]

Wow... I really enjoy this type of writing so it just speaks to me. I really like it. Speechless!

[Mirra]

Love the word pairings and the rhyme scheme :-) Brilliant poem!

[Mayank]

"Backwards suicide symphony's
Will forever stay inside, killing me" these two lines are f*****g brilliant.

[Patricia]

I really like this, I got lost with the last stanza though, which unfortunately, means I am not getting the full message. The sharp word pairings are pretty cool !!! :)

[Rana]

Ah, short and perfect.. Theres something about the way the words are used.. Really amazing..

[audrie]

I found this to be very powerful. . .nice work!