Forgive me..

Forgive me..

A Poem by Douglas Levi Gribbins
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It's good to be back.

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You ain't looking at the man that you should see.
And you ain't seeing the man i should be.
Only she see's the man that i could be.
I would be an angel, but god never understood me.
I've had a tough past, some kids think it's funny
ribbon around all my scars, turned me right into a mummy
Most of my thoughts go unseen, A curse? It must be
Cut me up until the pain makes my loved ones trust me
All my life I've lived under stitches and or a mask
Spent every breath like the final one, every second like it's the last.
Now i know that i can be rude, just cause i won't take disrespect.
I don't need anybody, It's only myself that i can affect.
So forgive me..

© 2014 Douglas Levi Gribbins


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Douglas Levi Gribbins
It's good to be back..

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Written with lots of emotions and memories. First line tells the all story. A good piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A lot of feelings in this poem that was strong and did not fail to reach out and touch my heart as I find this totally relate able. I'm defiantly seeing a spark in your work and you seem very talented with writing. Keep up the awesome work, Douglas! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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