Blind Freedom

This is me digging into my inner child, and being happy, regardless of all emotions currently present.

Now baby why are we

Arguing

When we could be...

Dancing in the dark to this beat

Now baby girl take my hand

Let the dance begin

Let the misery end

And let that smile start again

(Beat changes to a hip-hop styled beat, rather than singing)

(Xavier Fox)

I'm a rather smart guy, Don't confuse it

But Right now i'm dancing in the dark, to this music.

Society Acts like a love monster, Mutated Cupid

Shot me down with you, Turned me love stupid.

I can't tell you how many times I've wanted to lose it

But i don't choose to, I'd choose death if no other solution

I can't tell if love is hate, or what love is meant to be above

Something i can't live without, but what i want to get rid of.

Just dance with me, darling, no one can see

Our world is pitch black, and it's just you and me.

I swear, it's every day, just the same old stuff

But i damned if i'll ever be getting enough.

(Chorus)

Reviews

[Patricia]

Great flow, great timing, Society Acts like a love monster, Mutated Cupid
Shot me down with you, Turned me love stupid......love these lines!

[audrie]

"society acts like a love monster
mutilated cupid
shot me down with you
made my love stupid"

I really liked these lines - i also like how this piece describes a specific small amount of time and is filled with desire for another

[Lucien Maier]

not bad, good flow. I will read another.

[Ruth]

Sometimes light is found in darkness - nice flow and spoken with ease, lovely, insightful x