Love Long Gone.

This is a different side of me, that most people don't see.

Love will stand alone.

My hope is forever gone.

I tried so hard to fight.

But I'm losing every night.

Someday i will figure out my soul

Until then i will walk alone.

Maybe i should shoot my heart?

And forever i'm at the start...

Please save me your cries.

I'll be here till we both die..

"Life is never fair."

Some get more to fight, to bare.

Even when i'm destroyed, i'll fix myself.

Just to be there...For you..

It's not that i have nothing else

it's only you that i choose to care..

I wished i could rewind

I can see but i was blind.

You thought i didn't care.

None of my heart, you left to spare.

Now tell me why i choose to pour my heart.

In a glass that doesn't care?

I can hear love infront of me..

But nobody is there...

I'll write a note in my own tears.

I'll die to face my fears

Then be the man you always dreamed.

And be an angel with no wings..

I love you..

Author's Note

I'm sorry if i come across you as sad, but this was written literally at my worst moment.

Reviews

[audrie]

sometimes our best work comes out when we're sad. This piece speaks volumes about longing and desire to have that one person love you. . . nice job , , , you are very talanted

[Ruth]

Sad isn't always bad :) Just another way of purging...and this did so well x

[Lucien Maier]

good your emotions show in this piece. To truly write great you most exposed you most harried moments. and Live with all your emotions at once.

[Stephen]

Yeah .. I got that worst feelings in this song ..but be cool .. everything walks away with the time and present and time bring something new serving a peace .. stay blessed. This song`s nicely written ..all of your emotions are pouring into the words .. I must say that your rhyme`s pretty impressive. Keep writing stuffs with this coolio rhyme .. keep it up!