It Came From the Sky

This little horrific story is based on a real life event.

Who is that, That comes from the sky?

Soak the dark with your blinding light.

And so tonight, if i beg and plead

Will you cut my chains, and rescue me?

Oh odd creature, who came from the skies.

Will you save me, but from my own demise?
I'm bound to your sight, you are my beacon.

I lay awake, awaiting your teeth to sink in.

Inside i'm screaming, i'm hearing noises.

Outside i am singing, you are my poison.

Hands reach for you, My arms are shaking

My Suicide Symphony, Death in the making.

I'm standing up, my eyes are bleeding.

I smash the glass, my brain is sleeping.

As i collapse, you are coming nearer.

All this time, you were but a mirror...

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

A wonderful gothic romance write with a fantastic twist at the end.

[Mirra]

This poem is amazing! Well-penned. It made me want to read more.

[Rana]

Totally creative n imaginative.. Has a tinge of horror n is pleasurably dark.. Vivid terrifying encounter.. C:

[Saddam]

I'm standing up, my eyes are bleeding.
I smash the glass, my brain is sleeping.
As i collapse, you are coming nearer.
All this time, you were but a mirror...

From a horriffic subject you put Amezing verse.... Great one.

[Luna Zerimar]

This was so good.

Loved the last stanza!

[melissa]

This is awesome poem keep up the great work i can't wait to read more keep them coming

[Konigin]

This was absolutely stunning! Bravo! Heart-throbbing read, Superb pen. :) Well done.