Scary Movies

Scary Movies

A Poem by Douglas Levi Gribbins
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A bit of a horror/imagery type of writing im doing

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I walk around this place with a bloody mace

I chase, whatever i see in the mirror, it's always a race.

Sometimes i gaze into space , cause each reflection has a different face expression

Walk into my states, im in a state of insanity, it's not the best

i step into lest, see a skeleton, smoking a ciggarette, Black bones, my hands are wet

And i'm holding two mirrors up to my face, both of them aren't looking my direction

One expects perfection, the other just sits and fights through time, another sector of sections.

The first one is willing to fight for his talents, the other has to stand on all fours to keep balance.

One beats the competition with iron mallets, the other is getting beaten the mallets and a pallet!

All of a sudden they look my way, Both eyes, blank.

A face of blood and face of hope, My mind sank.

All of a sudden i saw pupils in eyes, Uncovered from emotional disguise.

Suddenly both of these guys, said the same way, broke from looks of lies.

I get choked by one of each hand, asking "Which one am i?"

 

 

© 2014 Douglas Levi Gribbins


Author's Note

Douglas Levi Gribbins
This is pretty emotional

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There is a beauty if brutality, you do not have to be an Ignatyev or Shelly to see the emotion of the work. I enjoyed this, very well put together.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Strong imagination..... It is an Awesome piece dear friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Enjoyable.. Vivid and all.. Bit about self-discovery.. At places, u've erred in the usage of words but thats quite inconspicuous.. I like this piece :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yet again another amazing piece

Posted 10 Years Ago


Pretty good I must say. I like the ending and the structure of it. Keep writing!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


the material is excellent. work on the technique and you will be phenomenal

Posted 10 Years Ago


Great imagery. It is almost like a movie. Good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on April 3, 2014
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Tags: Dark, Horror, Scary, BOO!


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