Broken Wings

Like my past writings, its dark with a twist, emotional, dark, and educational.

Have you ever

Loaded a gun that said "Goodbye"?

Have you ever.

Fell victim to the devil's lullaby?

It's trying to lure me to sleep

When i haven't even awakened.

He says he will fix my broken wings.

I wonder if i should take it?

It's just a bullet to the brain

Maybe a bit of poison past your lips

You could lay in pain, you go insane as

Listen to noises of your blood as it drips

You're getting lightheaded, The stress stays heavy

You're on the bed, You're sweating, You're voice is edgy

There's no noise, it's silent, You feel it, a red bed-sheet.

You feel it down your spine, you're Parylized 

You're burning, you can't even cry,  

You're eyes, Look at the devils paper that you must sign.

It's a sign of weakness, You have fear that you cannot hide.

You have your past, behind a mask, that will come at you fast

You can't run, you can't hide from it, Get a vibe from it.

Use it to stand up, Decide to get- Stronger, Don't take it longer.

You wake up, you're arms are fine, bed-sheet is white, Not a red line.

In sight, I insight that You will remember this night, Right?

The night that you fixed your own wings, and took flight.

Author's Note

I poured my heart into this, critisize at will.

Reviews

[Ghost Writer]

It makes me speechless I am awestruck. It is so deep and well written

[Luna Zerimar]

Extremely awesome. "The night you fixed your own wings, and took flight". Amazing ending.

[Matthew Bosko]

DLG,

This is my new favorite of yours. Very raw and real.

-Matt

[Coyote Poetry]

In a wild wife. We will do most of the acts in the poem. I believe some of us cannot regain angels wings even if we desired. I like the complete poem. Questions give the reader something to ponder. You poetry did. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Lucien Maier]

Good work, It flows well and draws the reader all the way through.

[Aptitudex]

it's quite dark but amazing all the while, and it ended nicely as well!

[Jack...]

Very dark but yet so cool and a positive ending. Nicely penned.

[KittyVenus]

dark and depressing, just how i like it!!

[Sam]

That was...so very powerful and extremely well written. I really feel you. I'm also 16 and I have trouble with people. This poem shows so much heart and soul and you should really be proud of it. Please continue to write. You honestly have such a special talent. Stupendous metaphors and the symbolism was marvelous.

[Saddam]

Use it to stand up, Decide to get- Stronger,
Don't take it longer.
You wake up, you're arms are fine, bed-sheet is
white, Not a red line.

Very well written and crafted one. Love to read it.