Dreams

While listening to "Airplanes" I decided to write down my own share of lyrics. Hope you enjoy this short verse.

I once dreamed of a place, 

A place for a kid who though life was a race.

A place where he thought it was time

A place where it won't matter what he looked like "He could rhyme"

Outside of his face all that you can see is a smile

A smile that only lasts until there's darkness all around.

Now nobody can see him cry

Everyone saw him try

Everyone saw him get lost in his thoughts and pass out, fall down.

But nobody saw that it wasn't just laughs

Nobody thought about what happened in his past

And he thinks once he's gone everyone the next days will praise it, raise the roof, and go ape s**t.

He's going crazy, his last words are "God save me"

Guess he's just another one who got away

Light off, Dark day.

Author's Note

I apologize for how short this is, but i think i spoke my mind on this one.

Reviews

[Dark Poet]

Wow, this poem really does take your breath away. The way these words just cut you right at the heart, it's unforgettable. You expressed your self incredibly well and I hope you write more like this:)

[xDalliance]

F**k. F**k f**k f**k this poem is amazing! (Sorry for the the, ahem, bad words but couldn't help it). A poem that brought goose-bumps on my arms. The poem just speaks to me. Amazing work!