Ravished

Ravished

A Poem by Celestial Witch Child
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This is strange...

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Curious lips of a blade firmly wrap
Around sun bronzed flesh
Nibbling and tasting voraciously
Needful, ravaging, lusting
Itching for the metallic tang of
Blood balling on the surface like pearls
Aching of a desire for more
Love of destruction
Starving for skin

© 2012 Celestial Witch Child


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self mutilation is a hard thing to recover from and many don't understand the need to cut. Many label people with this disorder as "freaks". Not true...it is a detrimental way of self nurturing when people don't know how to do it in a positive way and it comes an addiction.

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Baahhh!! Someone is famished i guess to be ravished?? Ha★ winks★ This poem is really full of passionate hunger. "Starving for skin"- this phrase drips with the insatiable hunger.. A down to earth write...

~Sophy

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self mutilation is a hard thing to recover from and many don't understand the need to cut. Many label people with this disorder as "freaks". Not true...it is a detrimental way of self nurturing when people don't know how to do it in a positive way and it comes an addiction.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I must agree with my reviewing predecessors, this is simply a great poem. Thanks, N

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Celestial Witch Child

12 Years Ago

Thank you. (:
Love this! I felt this while reading. Descriptive in a somewhat artistic but superb way.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Celestial Witch Child

12 Years Ago

Thank you very much! (:
Intriguing way to speak of this subject. I love the straightforwardness of this. Good job

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Celestial Witch Child

12 Years Ago

Thanks. (:
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Great work! I love the imagery of this piece. Although it is short, it packs a beautiful punch. Keep up the great work:)

-Cord

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Strange indeed, but wonderfully written. Very good imagery and rich with emotion. You took an idea that's often cliche and made it your own, well done! 100/100

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Nice imagery. This is has a very nice flow that seems to be violent and destructive. Godd job Mann :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax
strangely nice, enjoyed it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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This is a very interesting and descriptive poem... Excellent work! I enjoyed reading this!

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