Ravished

This is strange...

Curious lips of a blade firmly wrap
Around sun bronzed flesh
Nibbling and tasting voraciously
Needful, ravaging, lusting
Itching for the metallic tang of
Blood balling on the surface like pearls
Aching of a desire for more
Love of destruction
Starving for skin

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

self mutilation is a hard thing to recover from and many don't understand the need to cut. Many label people with this disorder as "freaks". Not true...it is a detrimental way of self nurturing when people don't know how to do it in a positive way and it comes an addiction.

[Sophy Freebirds]

Baahhh!! Someone is famished i guess to be ravished?? Ha★ winks★ This poem is really full of passionate hunger. "Starving for skin"- this phrase drips with the insatiable hunger.. A down to earth write...

~Sophy

[Neville]

I must agree with my reviewing predecessors, this is simply a great poem. Thanks, N

[Celestial Witch Child]

Thank you. (:

[BlackRose]

Love this! I felt this while reading. Descriptive in a somewhat artistic but superb way.

[Celestial Witch Child]

Thank you very much! (:

[Tai Ryens]

Intriguing way to speak of this subject. I love the straightforwardness of this. Good job

[Celestial Witch Child]

Thanks. (:

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Great work! I love the imagery of this piece. Although it is short, it packs a beautiful punch. Keep up the great work:)

-Cord

[Becky]

Strange indeed, but wonderfully written. Very good imagery and rich with emotion. You took an idea that's often cliche and made it your own, well done! 100/100

[Cosmic kid]

Nice imagery. This is has a very nice flow that seems to be violent and destructive. Godd job Mann :)

[Pax]

strangely nice, enjoyed it.

[Admiral Kirk]

This is a very interesting and descriptive poem... Excellent work! I enjoyed reading this!