Snap

A heavy weight champ battling the hours

Numbers pirouetting by on the flickering screen

A convoluted amphetamine parade 

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 repeat

Mind and body stalls, skips, rises, falls

When was the last time you slept?

Take another shot and cuddle up to your apathy

One more sunrise to force through your gullet

White noise screaming in your skull

A few too many bats in the belfry

Starve your body and feed your vices

1 2 3 repeat 1 2 3 repeat

Whirring, popping, crackling

Repeat

Repeat

Repeat

Reviews

[Symphonic_Sunflowers]

I really like how its written! Very well penned, and am keen to creep around on your profile to read more of your stuff! I really like your writing style :)

This may be a bad interpretation, or maybe even an obvious one, but I think this is about our constant need to breathe to live. And were doing nothing really, but existing.

I really enjoyed this :)
Never stop.

[mrbigteddybear]

i really enjoyed this work of brilliant art

[Annie S]

Wow Wow its just so good i literally have to kept re reading this ''white noise screaming in your skull''
perfect!! keep up the writing its soo good

[Celestial Witch Child]

Thank you so much!

[quixotic_rose]

AH! This is awesome, literally feel like I've snapped just by reading.
The line "Take another shot and cuddle up to your apathy" is very strong.
Very emotion evoking. Keep it up!
QR.

[Celestial Witch Child]

Thank you!

[Dayran]

On occasion it suddenly occurs to us that its not all random.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Umm...............what is it about?

[Willard Wells]

Sounds like the palooka that keeps coming back to be champ, but it is never meant to be. Same as life sometimes. Nice writing and I like it very much. Thanks.