Life keeps going

Yet again, these are some song lyrics I'd like to just put out there for the world to see.

In the deepest ocean

hiding from the sun.

Or on the barren plains

where the mustangs run.

On the highest peaks

seen through an eagle's eye,

to the great Maine forests

where the old pines lie.

Our Earth's had some

pretty tough times,

But life keeps going on.

A light breeze dances

by a willow tree,

while above, the birds

fly proud and free.

A wolf cries out to

it's kin afar,

raising it's eyes

up to the stars.

Our Earth has seen

better days,

But life keeps going strong.

To this day our

world preserves,

but doesn't get what

it deserves.

It gave us life,

but we pretend

that there are no

injuries to mend.

We treat our world

so wrong,

But life keeps going on.

Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

Simply wonderful. You have a very sensitive spirit and your words ring beautifully true with every line. Keep it up. Good write.

It gave us life,
but we pretend
that there are no
injuries to mend."

[Liz Pennies]

Unique. Good visuals. Keep at it.

If I could suggest an exercise for your next project I recommend a piece, similar in structure and message to this one, as it is obviously something you care about, but add character. Make the Earth as something alive. A living entity with emotion of its own. And give it more than just place. Give it story. It's experiences. Beginning middle and end. Delve deeper into "metaphor." (Just as an added challenge.)

But this, as is, is very nice. Again, keep it up.

[Ibreez Shabkhez]

Nice...keep wriitng.

[shedevil]

beautiful, and very green might i add