Eating Decay

Eating away time

Rusting, falling apart, rot

Stinging smell, putrid

Smokey, coughing loud

Raw, decomposing freshness

Gag, lost, soft ground touch

Crackling burn cackles

Moss-blanket wood gnaws at stone

Into crystal sand

No more! No more time!

Clock ticks, echoes, no one there.

Empty. Time decays.

TV static, fuzz

Empty rooms, silent hallways

Just then, no sound. Shh!

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

Okay first off love the pics they go hand in hand with the word. This is a wonderful peice! I love the no ones there empty time decays line the most wonderful job! Yours truely a mad lord

[GalaxyGhost]

Thank you!

[Kathrin S]

Such an interesting poem, and the pictures just accentuate the images. Quite creepy! I think they really help to make this clearer to the reader.
I especially enjoyed the line 'Empty. Time decays.' It's such an unusual image.

[GalaxyGhost]

Thank you! Time just passes and once it's here, it's gone.

[Ted Kniffen]

This seems like so many disjointed phrases, but after reading it over, in the end it works. Decidedly different.
Good write.

[GalaxyGhost]

Thank you!