Motherhood

Dedicated to all women

From your time as a girl, you were a mother already.

Playing mother to a doll and perfecting your skills

So one day, you'll have me.

I love you, dear mother, as you sacrificed for me,

Willing to be in harm's way.

A love of a mother will never leave, only an impact of

Change for me, your child.

Maternity didn't mark you as a mother, no.

You were already to a school of thirty children.

Yes, you have a heart-full of love and acceptance.

Thank you mother, for being there for me.

My inspiration and my dream-supporter.

Reviews

[Lord of mad men]

The is beautiful. It is true a mother is natural. You start before you have your children. You want to take care of those you love. When there sick or in pain you want to be there. That is just the way of being. This piece expresses that so very well. Just wonderful. You showed the true job of a mother. A mothers love is the first love you will ever feel. Her lo e with go with you for ever. Your whole life starts with her love. Yours truely mad lord

[GalaxyGhost]

Thank you! That's so true and I completely agree with you!

[Lord of mad men]

Your welcome! It was a pleasure to read.

[Kathrin S]

This is so wonderful. I love the way this mother sounds, she seems like a wonderful person - and also the way her child appreciates her.

My thoughts:
- "So one day, you'll have me" - this line didn't work for me. Since it's in the future it should be 'you'd have me', but even then, it sounds less polished than the rest of the poem.
- Cut the - out in 'heart-full'

Otherwise I really liked it, especially being a teacher myself.

[GalaxyGhost]

Thank you!